An Introduction

Feb 10, 2013 11:10 pm
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When I finished the first draft of Otherbound, I got myself a little gift: a drawing of one of the two PoV characters, Nolan. That drawing has been gracing the Otherbound page for a long time now. I love it, but he’s a little lonely.

So when the book deal happened, I got myself another little gift: a drawing of two other major characters. The artist is Nicc Balce, who’s done commissions for me before, and I am ever so pleased with the result. Meet Amara and Cilla:

Is that awesome or is that awesome? (hint: IT’S AWESOME~)

(Also, I guess not everyone has read this book yet, given that it’s… not out for another year… I keep forgetting that. SO ANYWAY, the girl on the left = Amara = the mute servant girl from the pitch = the second PoV character. Girl on the right = Cilla.)

Step Away From the Reset Button

Aug 03, 2012 1:48 am
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Sometimes one needs a fresh start.

See also: Batman & Robin, fatally flawed first drafts, Hulk poodles.

A lot of the time, though, a reset button can hurt you and your story. When we read or watch a series, we’re invested in these characters, their growth, and the changing status quo of the world they live in. It’s why we continually pick up the next book or record the next episode. If, at the end, nothing changes–for either better or worse–it can feel hollow, unnecessary, like filler.

We want to see growth.

Which is why it can be so, so vexing when creators seem to want to avoid this at all cost. To name a few recent examples:

[SPOILERS BELOW FOR RECENT WAREHOUSE 13, THE LEGEND OF KORRA, and CATWOMAN.]

Warehouse 13. At the end of last season, the warehouse was destroyed. Blown up. Gone. I watched and went, “Cool. Gutsy move.”

At the start of this season, we picked up right where we left off: the MCs stand in the middle of the destroyed warehouse, numbly taking in the debris surrounding them. Everything they’ve worked for over millennia–gone. Worse, the destruction of certain artifacts has nasty consequences. Things are set free that really shouldn’t be.

I got excited. Here’s what I thought would happen: Now, they have to fight to contain the effects of those destroyed artifacts. They’ll have to find new artifacts without the occasionally deus ex machina-y aid of previously captured artifacts. They have to rebuild the warehouse, one piece at a time.

It would have been awesome.

Here’s what happened: Artie turned back time. The warehouse is perfectly intact. Nothing to see here, move along.

Legend of Korra. At the end of the first season, Korra has her powers taken away by Amon. She’s powerless–until her airbending kicks in (and let’s not go into how that happens) and that ends up being the only skill left to her.

As an Avatar, she is destroyed.

Here’s what I thought would happen: Korra spends the season two perfecting her airbending and finally getting in touch with her spiritual side. This is great! She’ll finally learn to be less dependent on the “hit things with fire/stone/water” approach she’s been using all season! She’ll finally shed some of that Avatar arrogance!

After a frequently disappointing first season, I was all geared up for an amazing season two. The creators were shaking up the status quo, and now they were getting down to business.

Here’s what happened: Spirit!Aang showed up, restored Korra’s bending, and offered the Avatar state as a special treat. She then restored all the bending abilities Amon took away from other benders.

… Oh.

Catwoman: This is a different case from the above two. With comics, you need a reboot on occasion. Decades-long histories get incredibly unwieldy to manage, and they’re very unfriendly for newer readers to boot.

I appreciate that, so after some hesitation, I picked up some of the rebooted Catwoman comics this week. Between seeing The Dark Knight Rises, playing Batman: Arkham City, and reading some Gotham City Sirens trades, I had a craving for some Selina Kyle, and if there’s an active solo going on, welllll…

… I read it with a feeling of dread.

This new iteration of Selina is 23. She’s a thief. She’s self-destructive to the point of being suicidal. She has few true friends.

Here’s a taste of the plotlines: Selina’s apartment gets blown up. Selina gets a friend killed. Selina gets thoroughly beaten up. Selina has an emotional breakdown. Selina almost kills a man in revenge. Selina spars with Batman. Selina steals from the wrong people and gets into trouble. Selina helps out Gotham prostitutes. Selina has trouble opening up to her friends.

We’ve seen all of this before. These areas have been very, very well-covered in Catwoman’s previous solo run–except, wait, that doesn’t exist anymore. All the growth she had as a character is gone, and we’re repeating the same things with a sense of, “Been there, done that.”

We’ve back to square one.

What upsets me just as much as the erasure of her emotional growth is the resetting of the status quo. I loved seeing Selina turn from a thief to a fully-fledged (anti-)hero. She found out Batman’s identity. They talk to each other as equals. They have a mature, established relationship–be it as allies or lovers–and not this self-loathing, self-destructive ripping off of clothes where they can’t even hold a normal conversation.

Ted? Maggie? Holly? Helena? Gone.

Moving in with Harley Quinn and Poison Ivy, and the three of them grudgingly helping each other stay on the straight and narrow? Gone.

The friendly banter with Dick when he assumed the Batman mantle? Gone.

Playing on the same level as the other Bat allies? You’ve got it. Gone.

It’s hard to stick with a character for so long, root for them, and then be told, “Nope. Sorry. Classy? Mature? She’s no fun like this. We need her as a twenty-three-year-old with her bra showing in every other panel. Oh, and can we tie her to a chair and beat her up some?”

A similar thing happened to Spider-Man a couple of years ago. He’d grown up to be a confident, strong man, married to a fantastic woman. They had a loving, trusting, healthy, mature, equal relationship.

“Oh,” the company went. “Our readers can’t relate to that.”

So they wiped the marriage from the characters’ minds. Petey’s back to lamenting his inability to get a date.

I got my geek on for a moment there; sorry.

My point is… shake up the status quo. Have your characters evolve. Have the world change. Embrace the consequences of your plots.

As long as you do that, you’ll have an infinite supply of story.

And you’ll also avoid my bitching about you in my blog. (But seriously. Guys. Guys. What are you doing. Stop. Stoooop iiiiit.)

Leavin’ on a Jet Plane

Oct 06, 2011 2:42 pm
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… I’m kinda excited.

I’m nearly done running around the house making sure everything’s ready for the cat-sitter, and then it’s just down to stuffing my face with left-over Chinese food before heading to the airport. Yum.

Anyhow, what’s really important is that I made more BLINK ponies. Check out Mart and Jorn!

Pose because he’s busy fighting the powah (he wishes), hummingbird cutie mark because he longs to escape. Freckles because, er, he has freckles, and because a grouchy!pony with freckles is so damn cute.

Freckles x2. *pinches cheeks*

Anywho — expression because he’s an asshat; horn because he’s a mage; cutie mark because of his role as Cilla’s protector.

I’m still really excited about this book. I can’t wait until I can send it out into the world (aka my trusty betas). Of course, now comes the hard part — retaining that excitement throughout the editing process.

Good thing I get to take a break first. :D

Pooooniiieeeesss

Sep 27, 2011 12:11 am
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I’ve been semi-obsessed with My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic for a while now THANKS TO A CERTAIN SOMEONE, so when I saw this pony creator on Beth Revis’s blog, I didn’t have much choice but to join in.

So, yeah, here’s three of the main characters of my current WIP, BLINK:


I gave her a snowflake as a cutie mark partially because she’s speshul the place her family is from is a pretty darned cold place; the snowflake signifies home. It’s also fragile but hardy, matching Amara to a T. She gets neither a horn nor wings; she’s trapped where she is. The pose is because she’s trying to break free anyway.


Nolan gets wings and a planet as a cutie mark, signifying how he moves between worlds. He’s also troubled and searching for himself, hence the pose. With some fiddling, I managed to alter his hind leg enough to make it look like his foot has been amputated (though it’s the wrong leg and I’m too lazy to flip the picture right now).


Cilla gets a crown, a horn, and fancy bracelets, because she’s the freaking princess. Duh.

Why is she smiling? Because she looks adorable that way, is why.

… Also Amara and Nolan threatened to make this a depressed!pony blog, which is just wrong. Smiling pony! Happy pony! Yay ponies!

(Uh, not that Amara and Nolan don’t have reasons to be depressed. BRB, need to write and pile on the hurt some more.)

Showcasing Shinies, pt. 12: Yunupaya

Jul 28, 2011 1:00 pm
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Since I’m in Seattle from June 17th to July 31st to attend Clarion West, I’ve written a number of blog posts beforehand to post while I’m gone. I’ll be keeping an eye on the comments, but might take a while to respond.

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My very last Showcasing Shinies post. Phew! I really hope you’ve enjoyed looking at the pretty art, being able to put a face to the characters I mention on occasion, and have maybe even contacted some of these artists about commissions. They more than deserve it, and you’ll have something pretty to show off!

Anyway, I already showcased my character Yunupaya twice earlier; I’d like you to meet her delightfully scrappy, loud, and occasionally violent sister Len.

Who is slightly lacking in fingers. What is it with me and scarring my poor characters?


Len
by Diana Mallery


Len
by Tien Hee

Showcasing Shinies, pt. 11: Always Read the Fae Print

Jul 24, 2011 1:00 pm
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Since I’m in Seattle from June 17th to July 31st to attend Clarion West, I’ve written a number of blog posts beforehand to post while I’m gone. I’ll be keeping an eye on the comments, but might take a while to respond.

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The last of my Always Read the Fae Print-related art: pancake restaurant waitress extraordinaire, cheeriest of all sidekicks, wannabe-Goth and offensively faux Wiccan, She Of The Many Names — including Merel, Femke and Imke…

Yeah, that chick.


Femke
by Darci Robbins


Femke
by Shawna Mills

Showcasing Shinies, pt. 10: Yunupaya

Jul 21, 2011 1:00 pm
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Since I’m in Seattle from June 17th to July 31st to attend Clarion West, I’ve written a number of blog posts beforehand to post while I’m gone. I’ll be keeping an eye on the comments, but might take a while to respond.

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Showing off the rest of Yunupaya’s pictures:


Yunupaya
by Diana Mallery


Yunupaya
by Shaun O’Neil

Showcasing Shinies, pt. 9: Heirs

Jul 17, 2011 1:00 pm
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Since I’m in Seattle from June 17th to July 31st to attend Clarion West, I’ve written a number of blog posts beforehand to post while I’m gone. I’ll be keeping an eye on the comments, but might take a while to respond.

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You’ve already caught a glimpse of Roy, the main character from Heirs, when I posted the pictures of my beloved Nina. Here’s a couple more of my favorite ever deaf demon hunter… what do you mean, there’s not a lot of competition there?


Roy
by Samurai-PET


Roy
by Diana Mallery


Roy
by Shaun O’Neil

Showcasing Shinies, pt. 8: Always Read the Fae Print

Jul 14, 2011 1:00 pm
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Since I’m in Seattle from June 17th to July 31st to attend Clarion West, I’ve written a number of blog posts beforehand to post while I’m gone. I’ll be keeping an eye on the comments, but might take a while to respond.

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Last time I only showed half of the pictures of Lillian, the main character in Always Read the Fae Print; here are the others. I’m actually surprised I have so few of her, given how long this book has been my main project. Ah, Lillian. It’s been fun making your life miserable <3


Lillian
by Peter V. Nguyen


Lillian
by Darci Robbins

Showcasing Shinies, pt. 7: Yunupaya

Jul 10, 2011 1:00 pm
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Since I’m in Seattle from June 17th to July 31st to attend Clarion West, I’ve written a number of blog posts beforehand to post while I’m gone. I’ll be keeping an eye on the comments, but might take a while to respond.

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Yunupaya, the main character’s name, is just a working title for this book; I’ve rotated through a number of other titles, most notably Stranger, from when I started writing the book a couple of years ago during NaNoWriMo. Since then, I’ve overhauled my plans a dozen times — adding and removing PoV characters, combining characters, rethinking the plot, stretching it into a trilogy, etc.

Because of all those changes I’m still nowhere near ready to actually write the book, but I somehow still ended up with a good collection of art done of these characters. Here’s a couple of the aforementioned Yunupaya, with others to follow next week:


Yunupaya
by Niccolo Balce


Yunupaya
by Hugh Freeman