Showcasing Shinies, pt. 9: Heirs

Jul 17, 2011 1:00 pm
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Since I’m in Seattle from June 17th to July 31st to attend Clarion West, I’ve written a number of blog posts beforehand to post while I’m gone. I’ll be keeping an eye on the comments, but might take a while to respond.

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You’ve already caught a glimpse of Roy, the main character from Heirs, when I posted the pictures of my beloved Nina. Here’s a couple more of my favorite ever deaf demon hunter… what do you mean, there’s not a lot of competition there?


Roy
by Samurai-PET


Roy
by Diana Mallery


Roy
by Shaun O’Neil

Showcasing Shinies, pt. 5: Heirs

Jul 03, 2011 1:00 pm
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Since I’m in Seattle from June 17th to July 31st to attend Clarion West, I’ve written a number of blog posts beforehand to post while I’m gone. I’ll be keeping an eye on the comments, but might take a while to respond.

More on Showcasing Shinies.


I wrote most of the first draft of Heirs in August; the rest, uh, I haven’t written yet at all.

This book has been incredibly loud as of late, though, for several reasons. Chief amongst them: Nina.

Nina is one of my favorite characters ever. Since she’s not the main character in this book, though, I don’t have quite as much art of her as I would otherwise.


Nina
by Diana Mallery


Roy and Nina
by Niccolo Balce

Memory Lane

Feb 07, 2011 3:46 pm
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The other day, I went through a ton of my old notebooks to find the notes I made for the Always Read the Fae Print sequel.

Surprise number one: I actually found them.

Surprise number two: I also found the notes I made for the first book.

Back then, it was just named “Lillian fantasy” or “Lillian story” and Lillian was in college, studying Something Vaguely Scientific. I was still debating whether she should have burns or hellhound bites. There weren’t any fae yet — I had no idea of the antagonists or who/what they were after, though I did have an idea fo the first scene. (That one actually stuck for the length of the adult version.) At one point, I decided the story needed dragons.

Arjan started off not with a personality or role in the story, but with the following note:

For Lillian story – crush name = Jelle? Arjan? Something very Dutch but simple enough.

Another bit of insight into my thought process:

What kind of critters – made up? Base off existing goblin type things? Research. Also: WTF is actual plot/motivation?

Flipping ahead a few pages, Lillian is still in college instead of working at the restaurant, but I can see the actual plot coming together. The way hellfire works, how her scars tie into the plot, how her dad the warlock sets things in motion, the first incarnation of Merel/Femke (as ‘witch type person’)…

And at the end of that page, I remind myself that I don’t want to make it too YA-y. That went well.

As for my other books? Heirs started out as an adult novel as well. It was going to be very noir and dark. (Um, notsomuch anymore.)

My traumatized, reclusive, messed-up Cally from The Hands of Cally Wu started out as your basic sassy kick-ass urban fantasy heroine.

I love seeing how these things come together. It also really helps me when plotting my next projects: when I’m particularly attached to a concept or plot point that just won’t work for the book, or when I despair at my lack of plot or the flimsiness of the story so far, I remind myself how much these other books changed before I even put a single letter on paper. It helps so much in powering through and getting the story to what I need it to be.

Wherein Corinne is a Stubborn Jerk

Dec 04, 2010 5:15 pm
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So, when four very wise writers all tell me the same thing – finish Heirs before you do anything else – what do I do?

If you said “start overhauling Always Read the Fae Print to YA”, you’d be correct.

I’ve got the first one and a half chapter down – still in need of edting, of course, but it’s a good start. Most of the work will be in the beginning and ending, so that’s what I’m focusing on for now.

I’m not remotely giving up on Heirs; it’s my main priority after I finish this draft.

But, you know. Doing this is coming easy right now, so any progress I can make is a bonus.

Back to cannibalising bits and pieces of the old MS!

Shinies Here, Shinies There, Shinies Everywhere

Dec 02, 2010 12:41 pm
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While I’m aware that I have some very legitimate attention span problems, I’m sure this dilemma is one that every author in the world is familiar with: what the heck do I work on next?

In my case, I have several novel-length projects clamoring for my attention Right! This! Instant! Normally, I would simply finish one project (in this case, Heirs) and then figure out what needs to happen next, but this post by Rachel Aaron made me want to take a step back and consider my options.

  1. Heirs: This draft is about 20k away from being done, and I hate leaving projects unfinished. It’s the first in a YA urban fantasy trilogy, and I think the different perspective of the MC – he was forced out of the demon-slaying biz after he became deaf but desperately wants back in – might just pique agents’ attention. Plus, trilogies are hot. Which leads me to…
  2. Yunupaya. Or Stranger. Or the half-dozen other crappy titles I came up with for this as-of-yet-unwritten YA sci-fi trilogy which I’ve been playing with for over a year. I’m super excited about it; I think it hits a good mix of original and commercial. This was supposed to be the project I’d start on after Heirs.
  3. The Newest and Shiniest of All Projects: This one only popped into my head this week, and it’s taking over the neighborhood. I can’t say too much about it yet, but it’s a standalone YA paranormal/fantasy which is a bit more real-world-based than most of my other fantasy projects. It’s also currently bouncing up and down going “I’m THE ONE! WRITE ME. WRITE ME NOW.” Every book does that in the beginning… but every time it feels right. And I really think this could garner a lot of interest.
  4. The Hands of Cally Wu: Did I mention I hate leaving projects unfinished? I was supposed to edit this in November. I, uh, didn’t. Basically, I do really love this book and want to mold it into something better than the pathetic excuse of a first draft it is now… but it’s not my regular genre/style, and I worry that I’d be wasting time I could be spending on other books that are in my genre, which would be more useful to my career in both the short and long term.
  5. Always Read the Fae Print. Yes, okay, so I just turned down an agent offer. Yes, I’ve queried more agents with this than I care to admit. Yes, I’d pretty much given up on this book… but I really think it could work as a YA. I’ve had that thought for months and months. It means rewriting the whole darned thing, but it’d open up a lot of other avenues. I don’t want to rework a project to death; I know how important it is to move on to the next book. At the same time, there’s life in this project, and I don’t want to give up if it still has a chance.

As you might’ve noticed, I’m trying to take a very objective, commercial view of these projects. Let’s be honest here, my current number one priority is getting an agent.

I’m not selling out: whatever choice I’ll make, I’ll be writing a book that I love and want to write. It’s just that, well, this one is more commercial, and that one’s more interesting, and this one is so close to being done, and this one is more in my regular style, and this one could be The One but it’s kinda different from what I usually write so what if people wouldn’t like my regular work…

… Yeah, this is why getting an agent is so important to me. I always struggle to know what the best course of action is, and it would be such a huge help to have someone else to discuss that with.

Basically, I need a goal. I don’t work well without one. And right now, I’m floundering.

So how do you decide what to work on next? If you’ve got any pointers, I’m all ears!

30 Days of Writing Come To An End

Nov 04, 2010 5:13 pm
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A few days late, since some other posts nagged at me… but hey, life happens. Here’s the end of the meme!

26. Let’s talk art! Do you draw your characters? Do others draw them? Pick one of your OCs and post your favorite picture of him!
What, me? Talk about art? I’d never do that. :D

Anyway, yes, in theory, I draw my characters a lot, but in practice, I’m never happy and never finish. Because of this, I spend outrageous amounts of money on commissioning other artists to draw my characters. I revel in this.

One of my absolute favorites is the drawing Niccolo Balce did of Roy and Nina, my MCs for the YA novel I started this year. It’s beautifully drawn, captures the characters well, and look! It’s even got the Perry Private Academy sign in the background!

27. Along similar lines, do appearances play a big role in your stories? Tell us about them, or if not, how you go about designing your characters.
A big role, as in, do I mention them? Absolutely, and probably more than I ought to. I suspect it has to do with the artist thing. I’m very focused on visuals.

A big role as in, in the plot? I guess Lillian’s burn scars count, but what caused them is more important than the scars themselves.

As far as designing my characters goes, I usually have a basic appearance in mind. Then I get onto GettyImages.com, fill in some traits (usually some combination of gender, age, ethnicity, hairstyle/color and expression), and search the results for models that make me go “yes! That’s HER!”

I get such a thrill when I recognize my character in some unknown model. It’s wonderful.

Often, though, certain details just randomly come to me. I’m also starting to keep a list of certain visual traits that I may tack onto characters later on.

28. Have you ever written a character with physical or mental disabilities? Describe them, and if there’s nothing major to speak of, tell us a few smaller ones.
Yes, several. Emily from Wielders has severe PTSD; the MC from my short “Dependency” has epilepsy; an injury Merel sustains in Fae Print will last her throughout the rest of the series; Cally has a wide assortment of (undiagnosed) mental problems; her sister Viola walked with a cane due to a knee injury (she might not count, since she dies at the very start); Roy from Heirs is deaf and probably has some amount of PTSD; his mother uses a wheelchair; one of his love interests, Amy, is Deaf…

I could go on with characters from as-of-yet unwritten novels, but, ah, then we’d be here for a while yet. So let’s stick to this!

29. How often do you think about writing? Ever come across something IRL that reminds you of your story/characters?
I suspect this question made most of you laugh out loud. For good reason. Moving on.

(And in case you really need answers — constantly and DUH, respectively.)

30. Final question! Tag someone! And tell us what you like about that person as a writer and/or about one of his/her characters!

Oh man, I hate tagging people. I always feel like I’m picking favorites of some sort! But let’s see – I think I tag Beth Cato. I’ve followed her LiveJournal for a while now and I will never cease to be amazed by how diligent a writer she is; I’ve lost count of how often she’s rewritten her novel Normal, and I’ve given up on even being surprised when she finishes yet another short story or poem.

May I clone your work ethic, Beth?

Monday Morning Questions

Oct 11, 2010 1:08 pm
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It’s actually past 1 in the afternoon, but, ah, we’ll just say it’s morning. It still feels like morning, but that may have something to do with my lack of productivity so far.

In my defense, it is Monday.

So instead – question time!

6. Where are you most comfortable writing? At what time of day? Computer or good ol’ pen and paper?
Honestly? Everywhere, anytime. It depends on a lot of factors, but location and time aren’t among them. I was fairly productive on the plane from Sydney to Kuala Lumpur, sitting in the center seat in the center row (blegh!), writing in my battered notebook with a barely-functional pen – but I can slack off enormously in a dead-silent house, sitting comfortably in front of my computer. (And vice versa.)

I think I prefer the computer though. It’s just faster. If only it didn’t come with those pesky distractions *g*

7. Do you listen to music while you write? What kind? Are there any songs you like to relate/apply to your characters?
Rarely; I usually pay too much attention to lyrics to be able to focus on what I’m actually writing. When I do listen to music, it’s usually music I’m very familiar with.

I definitely love making soundtracks to my characters. There’s too many to name! Just going on main characters, though, these are my current favourites…

For Roy from Heirs:

For Cally from The Hands of Cally Wu:

For Lillian from Always Read the Fae Print:

8. What’s your favorite genre to write? To read?
I love writing contemporary fantasy/sci-fi, blending the speculative with our own world. The options are limitless, and you already have a world to ground yourself in and relate things to.

As far as reading goes, I’m more open to other genres. Overall, I think I’m more drawn to styles of writing than genre. (And no, I don’t think I could easily describe it. Just some stories annoy me, and some I love, and genre has little to do with it. But of course I’m incredibly fond of fantasy/sci-fi done well – but the flipside is that I get terribly annoyed when it’s done wrong, in my not-so-humble opinion.)

9. How do you get ideas for your characters? Describe the process of creating them.
This varies so much. Sometimes they pop up mostly-formed; other times, I start from a vague idea and go from there. For Roy from Heirs, my process went like this: I wanted to write your standard demon-slaying badass, who’s forced out of his job due to a sudden disability. What aspect of the character would provide the most conflict in this kind of situation? If he’s completely dedicated to the job. Certain traits began to form, like stoicism, and confidence-bordering-on-arrogance. When his ex-girlfriend showed up (in my head, that is), I started thinking of him as opposed to her: since his ex is telepathic, communication between them is easy. To contrast this, he doesn’t actually express his feelings or opinions that often. And since his ex is a consummate liar and actress, he values honesty and reliability.

10. What are some really weird situations your characters have been in? Everything from serious canon scenes to meme questions counts!
Um, every scene from Fae Print. The book starts with a flying doormat delivering a message from Lillian’s mom. Later on, Lillian takes on a werewolf with cutlery and a cordless phone, threatens a Germanic god with a bike pump, and various other things.

30 Days of Writing

Oct 09, 2010 8:26 am
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I stole this meme from K.V. Taylor, who found it on Mercedes M. Yardley’s blog. Like her, I totally love reading about these things – so please go ahead and steal this thing! I’d looove to read your answers.

Also, it’s really handy if you’re currently exhausted from a long holiday and can’t really come up with other blog topics. I’m just saying.

1. Tell us about your favorite writing project/universe that you’ve worked with and why.
It’s a toss-up between the worlds from Always Read the Fae Print and Heirs. I love the former because there’s limitless freedom when it comes to including different species and ideas. Because the books don’t take themselves too seriously, I don’t have to worry as much about my ideas being ridiculous. They’re supposed to be! Not to mention all the potential to lovingly mock the genre and turn fantasy tropes upside-down.

As far as Heirs goes, I like it for the complete opposite reason. There are lots of rules and limits, and there’s a very important history to the world. The entire thing just clicks in my mind. The limitations make it easier to keep track of – while at the same time, they make it more of a challenge. Unlike Fae Print, this world needs to make sense.

(Don’t get me wrong, Fae Print is hardly a free-for-all – I spent a lot of time world-building. It’s just different!)

2. How many characters do you have? Do you prefer males or females?
What would this include? Main characters? Secondary characters? Any character with a name? Any character who shows up on-screen?

Basically, I couldn’t count. *g*

Anyway, as far as main characters go, I think I prefer women. I feel less self-conscious writing them. With men, I worry about stereotyping. I catch myself thinking, “Men wouldn’t notice this many details about someone’s clothing”, “he’s being too touchy-feely”, even while knowing that, yeah, that’s nonsense. There’s only this particular guy and what he would think or do.

Plus, there’s these gender problems that arise: I feel pretty uncomfortable writing male characters being violent against women, even when said women are ~*evil*~ and at the moment it’s the necessary course of action. (And, er, obviously that’d be the only situation in which it’d come up. But still!)

So taking all that into account, women are easier for me. But – maybe because they require more conscious thought – I often enjoy writing men more. It’s a challenge!

3. How do you come up with names, for characters (and for places if you’re writing about fictional places)?
I keep lists of names I like and scour through them when I have a new character, waiting for something to click. Sometimes, though, the name will come to me immediately. Sometimes against my will. (Lookin’ at you, Cally!)

The two most common sources for names: Wikipedia (I look through the “list of celebrities/musicians/etc” pages) and my job. Since I enter customer data into the system, it’s a great way to come across names.

4. Tell us about one of your first stories/characters!
Very, very first? I remember two short stories: one was about a boy who cut himself on a plant in the park and ended up turning into some kind of weird plant thing, and one was about a ghost ship. The latter was in the school paper. I was eight at the time, and so, so very proud. The main character was Kelly van Daluren. I was very focused on not making her anything like me: she liked food that I didn’t, had brown hair as opposed to my blonde, and had a brother instead of a sister. It was a great accomplishment.

Also, ‘daluren’ means ‘off-peak hours’. As in calling. Yeah.

And, at one point the narrative is yelling at you in underlined, bold, italicized letters. In a bigger font. Spectacular!

5. By age, who is your youngest character? Oldest? How about “youngest” and “oldest” in terms of when you created them?
Just going by my novels, I think the youngest named character is Nikki, age six. She’s Arjan’s (he’d be Lillian’s love interest) niece in Fae Print. The oldest significant character is probably Lillian’s mother Carol, who’s… either in her late fifties or early sixties. It keeps changing between drafts!

In terms of creation, the youngest is probably Lynne from Wielders, and the oldest – not counting books I haven’t written yet – would be Felicia from Heirs. She popped up in one scene, then wormed her way into the ending, then took over another major character’s part.

And man, these questions made me so anxious to finish Heirs already. :D

Me, Me, Me & Some Crimson-Coloured Papers

Sep 01, 2010 10:42 pm
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Don’t ask me how it’s September already, because I truly have no clue whatsoever – but it means several very good things, including the very first issue of The Red Penny Papers going live! It includes my pulp-y short story “The John”, which I’ve mentioned on the blog here and there, as well as the following lovely stories by friends of mine:

“Pluvial” by NK Kingston
“Shaper of Dreams” by John Cash
“Postcard Wings above Blackpool Sands” by Cate Gardner
“Black Medicine Thunder and the Sons of Chaos” Episode 1 by Aaron Polson

Many thanks to the fabulous K.V. Taylor for putting it all together. I’m so happy to be a part of this!

Also, how truly bad-ass is that cover by C. Bernard? (This happens to be the same artist who did that drawing of Lillian on Always Read the Fae Print‘s page for me. Awesome!)

September also means that it’s only a few short days before I leave for vacation: specifically, my plane departs for Singapore on Saturday evening. On Tuesday, I’ll hop onto another plane headed for Sydney, where I’ll stay until the end of the month.

In other words: don’t expect much blogging from me during that time, though I might try to schedule some to keep this place from becoming a desert land.

As far as my progress on Heirs goes – it is WIP Wednesday, after all – I’m afraid it’s gotten stalled. Apparently doing 56k in less than three weeks takes its toll on the brain. Given all the preparations needed for my epic vacation, I figured it was best to put it on hold for now.

Come October, though, that book is going down. Mark my words!

WIP Wednesday: The Book That’ll Need To Book Faster If It Wants To Book Properly

Aug 25, 2010 9:01 am
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I am really not good at keeping up this pace of 3k-4k a day for any extended period of time.

I guess that’s why I’m trying, though. Have to stretch myself, right?

Anyway, the current count:

53300 / 75000 words. 71% done!

And the obligatory snippet, full of MAN ANGST:

      I took too long to fall asleep, forcing my head full with thoughts of Nina and Amy instead of everything else that’d happened this week. That should have made for good dreams.
      Not so much, as it turned out.
      The dream was the same as every night. In it, I could still hear—even when I wasn’t supposed to.
      In this dream, my subconscious just made things up. In it, the blasts lingered, kept going long after the first one slammed me into the balcony railing and knocked out my hearing. In it, I heard the crash as my bedroom floor collapsed, the way the remains of the floor creaked and sagged, the wood clinging to the walls despite the roar of the fire eating away at it. I heard my graphic novels and comic books—the ones I never dared bring to the Perry—sliding from the shelves. The windows exploding. Glass cracking, sprinkling everywhere and slicing open my skin.
      In the dream, I barely registered it.
      I just stood on the balcony (though I wasn’t supposed to be standing), and listened to the other bombs going off throughout the house, one by one. I didn’t even worry about Mac sleeping on my pillow, right where the first bomb went off, or my mother on the other side of the house.

I’d write more, but I’ll need to get at least 6k today if I want to make up for my slacking off earlier this week. Ta!